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Dear Salon,
You didn't do David Brin any favors by letting stand his weird punctuation and portentous sentence fragments. I gave up after the first page, and I'll read just about any goofy prognostication about the Internet. Maybe I am a crank (and I admit to being an English professor and a professional editor), but my point is that Salon usually does a lot better than this.
So, in that spirit, I hope you will keep up the good work.
Cheers,
David Robinson