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I think you are arguing for one side here -- you tip your hand when you write that Clinton won the popular vote. That's a talking point, not a fact.
Check out this link from factcheck.org:
http://www.factcheck.org/askfactcheck/did_clinton_win_the_popular_vote.html
Or this one, from realclearpolitics:
http://www.realclearpolitics.com/epolls/2008/president/democratic_vote_count.html