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That's exactly a case that was made against Al Gore: "He would micromanage everything." It would have been great to have had someone who insisted on seeing the letter of warning that was sent about an imminent attack on the United States. Great to have someone who would micromanaged enough to stop the attack.
I don't know what would have happened but I like the hypothesis.
I don't know if Clinton is the right candidate, but I don't like weak arguments against her--there are plenty of substantial ones out there.