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the line that works, Brightstar, is an authentic one to someone you have some common ground with to talk about something interesting. If you surf, find people surfing and start talking. that's honest. And just cuz those girls aren't in clubs doesn't mean they wouldn't be possibly open to casual sex (or a relationship)
if you just want a slut in some club, just 'hi, you look fantastic. I'm ___' would probably work better than being gross.
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And no, you don't scare me, you just make me sick and exhausted