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Kansas travels undercover as a journalist for Agrarian Now.
  • Okay, the art is getting somewhat better...

    ...but, um, little things like suspense, pacing, and why-we-should-give-a-damm-at-all-about-anybody-in-this-thing are still missing. And the exposition info-dump is still more annoying than enlightening. Guys, please--get yourself a couple of graphic novels (anything by Alan Moore is a good start) and learn how to build and pace a story.